A Pixar story artist named Emma Coats shared some amazing tips on Twitter recently that I found to be fabulous stuff. So without further ado, Emma's words of wisdom:
#1: You admire a character for trying more than for their successes.
#2: You gotta keep in mind what's interesting to you as an audience, not what's fun to do as a writer. They can be v. different.
#3: Trying for theme is important, but you won't see what the story is actually about til you're at the end of it. Now rewrite.
#4: Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that, ___. Because of that, ___. Until finally ___.
#5: Simplify. Focus. Combine characters. Hop over detours. You'll feel like you're losing valuable stuff but it sets you free.
#6: What is your character good at, comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at them. Challenge them. How do they deal?
#7: Come up with your ending before you figure out your middle. Seriously. Endings are hard, get yours working up front.
#8: Finish your story, let go even if it's not perfect. In an ideal world you have both, but move on. Do better next time.
#9: When you're stuck, make a list of what WOULDN'T happen next. Lots of times the material to get you unstuck will show up.
#10: Pull apart the stories you like. What you like in them is a part of you; you've got to recognize it before you can use it.
#11: Putting it on paper lets you start fixing it. If it stays in your head, a perfect idea, you'll never share it with anyone.
#12: Discount the 1st thing that comes to mind. And the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th – get the obvious out of the way. Surprise yourself.
#13: Give your characters opinions. Passive/malleable might seem likable to you as you write, but it's poison to the audience.
#14: Why must you tell THIS story? What's the belief burning within you that your story feeds off of? That's the heart of it.
#15: If you were your character, in this situation, how would you feel? Honesty lends credibility to unbelievable situations.
#16: What are the stakes? Give us reason to root for the character. What happens if they don't succeed? Stack the odds against.
#17: No work is ever wasted. If it's not working, let go and move on - it'll come back around to be useful later.
#18: You have to know yourself: the difference between doing your best & fussing. Story is testing, not refining.
#19: Coincidences to get characters into trouble are great; coincidences to get them out of it are cheating.
#20: Exercise: take the building blocks of a movie you dislike. How d'you rearrange them into what you DO like?
#21: You gotta identify with your situation/characters, can't just write ‘cool'. What would make YOU act that way?
#22: What's the essence of your story? Most economical telling of it? If you know that, you can build out from there.
Really great thought provoking stuff.
She shares a lot of interesting things on Twitter.
Do you have a favorite tip? Why?
Awesome post. Very helpful stuff.
ReplyDeleteI really like to finish and move on. I needed some reinforcement on that one!
ReplyDeletelove that! printing it! pixar is master story teller!
ReplyDeleteGreat tips! One of my favorites is: Just Do It. Wait, that's for athletics... Still, I think, with writing, it applies :)
ReplyDeleteThese are fantastic tips! I really needed to hear these today :)
ReplyDeletegreat insights--13,14 and 15 especially resonate with me!
ReplyDeleteI like - put it on paper so you can fix it. I once heard, "I have never written anything as good as I have written in my head" or something like that. So true.
ReplyDeleteBookmarking this! Actually - I ought to print it out and pin it up by my computer. These are great. I really need to get on twitter more. And make sure I'm following her! Who is it?
ReplyDeleteI think #11 is my favorite...and the hardest to do! I can't tell you how many times I've thought of something totally awesome (at least I think so) and then I forget it because I didn't write it down! grrr
ReplyDeleteThat is a really great list and I'm going to save a copy of it myself too. I'm going to have to find her on Twitter and follow for future tidbits.
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